Your world has holes. My world-building audit helps you fix them.
This is a quick, brutal audit to expose the gaps killing your immersion. It's written by a fantasy-and-romantasy developmental editor who tends to notice what others miss.
What's Inside the Audit
Inside, you’ll get targeted questions and checkpoints across:
Core Logic & Internal Consistency
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Do your rules make sense and stay consistent across scenes?
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Are there contradictions, loopholes, or logic breaks readers will catch immediately? And, trust me, readers will catch them.
Culture, Society & Power Structures
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Are your cultures flat, or do they have texture, tension, and influence?
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Does your world feel lived-in rather than decorative?
Magic Systems & Supernatural Elements
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Are the limits clear?
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Do abilities create consequences, not convenience?
Environment, History & Lore
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Does the geography shape the people?
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Do your histories create actual cause-and-effect in the present?
Characters Within Their World
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Do characters interact with their environment in believable ways?
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Do they reflect the culture, rules, and history you built?
Immersion Killers to Catch ASAP
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Common continuity issues
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Missing connective tissue
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Places where readers get knocked out of the story
Use this checklist to spot the problems before beta readers, revisions, and editors.
It’s fast and clear. It tightens your world in ways that actually matter to the story.
Roe Horvat
"[Megan] not only pinpoints critical issues but also suggests solutions that align well with my writing. Thanks to her input, I was able to move forward...even though I had felt stuck before."
Lyx Robinson
"When reading new material, [Megan] carefully weighs it against prior events, and poses exactly the right questions I need to hear to better honour the characters and wider plot."
Cassandra
"Megan is like an Olympic coach for writers—she'll push you to levels you didn't know you could reach."